I got it back from Quinn, still largely intact. :-p
Seriously, don't you love it when someone asks you questions about your work and you have this moment when you're like, "Oh, yeah! I didn't even think of that." In fact, based on her questions and comments, I spent today expanding, expounding, and revising.
On a Saturday.
And I enjoyed it.
And though the chapter is still a work in progress, days like today remind me why I chose this field.